• supersquirrel@sopuli.xyzOP
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    9 days ago

    I love it but I would edit to

    28 tankers on the Azov tonight, 28 tankers at sea

    A drone flies through the wheelhouse door, and now it’s on the sea floor!

    27 tankers on the Azov tonight…

    However it still needs work, as far as I am aware most of these ships haven’t actually been sunk.

    The metaphor should be something more like “light a tanker on fire and the rest scatter like a cockroaches from a switched on light.

    Maybe…

    28 tankers on the Azov tonight, 28 tankers at sea

    Take one down, dronestrike the bridge, and now it’s nothing but flaming carnage!

    27 tankers on the Azov tonight…

    The wheelhouse furnishing business for commercial shipping is about to hit some intense bottlenecks.

    I don’t imagine shipbuilders have planned supply chain structures with the idea that the bridge of a ship may be destroyed repeatedly throughout the lifetime of a ship…

    • Tar_Alcaran@sh.itjust.works
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      9 days ago

      There once was a ship that put to sea
      The name of that ship was the Yevgeni
      The drones struck hard, her bow dipped down
      Blow up Magyar boys, blow.

      Soon may the droneswarm come
      To blow them all to kingdom come
      One day, when the fightin’ is done
      We’ll take our sea and go